My “Teaching Writing: Secondary” professor recently assigned an article that instantly won my approval. The article by Nancy Sommers, entitled “Responding to Student Writing”, discusses the tendency for teachers to overload and confuse students with the “expert comments” they jot throughout the students’ papers.
All too often, writers and revisers overlook the fact that writing is a process, and that there are steps to the revision process as well. When teachers attack small-scale issues (commas, wordiness, word choice, etc.) and big-scale issues (organization, focus, specificity etc.) all at once, the surfaces onto which students’ pour their imaginations, efforts, and time melt into masses of frightening ink-stains. Intimidating, isn’t it?
Part of the in-depth training that GVSU Writing Consultants receive focuses on what we at the Writing Center call “gross” to “close”–a short and sweet reminder that big-scale issues come first, small-scale last. As Nancy Sommers addresses in her article, to point out minor issues is essentially a waste of time and patience for both teachers and students; when big ideas such as organization or clarity are effectively revised, paragraphs morph, ideas develop, a focus crystallizes…and suddenly those small-scale issues aren’t even relevant because they’ve been removed from the paper altogether. Why add unnecessary weight upon students’ shoulders at the start of the revision process?
As I’ve learned and come to believe whole-heartedly throughout my work as a writing consultant, “gross” issues come first, and “close” issues come last. For the most part, they should not simultaneously appear. Sommers says that the “different signals given to students, to edit and develop, to condense and elaborate, represent also the failure of teachers’ comments to direct genuine revision of the text as a whole.” The whole of the text, the bigger picture of the paper, is initially more important than all that little stuff we could spend hours inking around in a single paper.
I believe that the greatest importance in writing is for the writer to effectively present concepts in clear, specific, focused way that readers are able to understand. If a paper has great potential but is a bit confusing, what good is worrying about “word choice” when clarity and development are necessary?
This concept blends with the theme of teaching abroad or teaching ESL/ELL students. I individually meet with the same two ESL students weekly in order to help them improve their language and writing skills. While I certainly help them tackle confusion over tenses, articles, punctuation, etc., making sure that I clearly understand what the writers are trying to say is the most important task of all. Sometimes as I read a student’s paper aloud, I stumble through the words and cannot make meaning out of sentences, but I don’t just jot corrections throughout the confusing sentences. I often have to ask the writer what he/she meant to say, and I grasp understanding as I hear the verbal explanation/elaboration. Seeking understanding, clarity, focus, organization of thoughts, etc. before addressing grammar is essential to effectively working with ELL/ESL students’ writing. If I don’t understand what a writer’s point is, how could I even mark up the grammatical bits of his or her sentences?
Shouldn’t teachers ask that same question when they’re commenting on native English writers’ papers as well?
“Responding to Student Writing”
Nancy Sommers
College Composition and Communication
May 1982